The only constructive comment I'd give is that the right arm (her right) looks a little shorter than her left. It could be perspective, but it threw me off a little!
yh i noticed that, but realised that the fingers are out so there's extra height to the arm. But i know what you mean. There's so many things wrong with her anatomy. But im still learning. thanks for the comment
i think it's just because there is not enough of a bend in her left arm. I think maybe it would work better if the angle of the upper arm was rotated from the elbow about 10 or 15 degrees to the right where we can then see a hint of shoulder. Also her right arm could have more of a bend in it, with the elbow jutting out a bit more to compensate for the length. I am crap at explaining things in text so i made a quick sketch.
for me the arms are in proportion within the perspective, there is nothing anatomically wrong with this piece, if you look again closely you will notice the illusion of lengthy right arm because her left shoulder is higher
Nice work Ken :)
ReplyDeleteThe only constructive comment I'd give is that the right arm (her right) looks a little shorter than her left. It could be perspective, but it threw me off a little!
Otherwise, very nice work indeed. :)
yh i noticed that, but realised that the fingers are out so there's extra height to the arm. But i know what you mean. There's so many things wrong with her anatomy. But im still learning. thanks for the comment
ReplyDeletei think it's just because there is not enough of a bend in her left arm. I think maybe it would work better if the angle of the upper arm was rotated from the elbow about 10 or 15 degrees to the right where we can then see a hint of shoulder. Also her right arm could have more of a bend in it, with the elbow jutting out a bit more to compensate for the length. I am crap at explaining things in text so i made a quick sketch.
ReplyDeletefor me the arms are in proportion within the perspective, there is nothing anatomically wrong with this piece, if you look again closely you will notice the illusion of lengthy right arm because her left shoulder is higher
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